tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4714201097098081298.post2766515021829113692..comments2009-07-31T07:54:40.732-07:00Comments on The DAys of oUr LIVes: ThisOldManhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04575343765474914587noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4714201097098081298.post-51944270032565020642009-07-14T10:21:19.399-07:002009-07-14T10:21:19.399-07:00Ah the problems of technology! I just wrote you a ...Ah the problems of technology! I just wrote you a big comment and lost the whole thing! So here goes again, I'm keeping it shorter this time. One compliment and one piece of constructive criticism. Great details, you really painted a picture in my mind. I could see, hear, smell and feel what you were writing about. Something I think you could add to your next blog to make it even better would be some dialogue. It would really bring your story to life. Sorry for the abbreviated comment, but that was the gist. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your blogs!mcole3https://www.blogger.com/profile/03321970721566800800noreply@blogger.com